Can i get some experienced Graphics designers feedback?

How are these Signatures? These are the three signatures and one avatar ive done. Dont be too harsh this is my second or third day at this. (not sure if i should count the first day)

Oh, and i did my own sig

Thanks for thoughs/ideas/feedback

 

[Danai]

In all honesty, the colours you use are too dark, and the text outlines are too "out there". The clouds that you add aren't faded enough at the edges and therefore don't look cloudy enough.

Keep continuing to work though. Each artist improves in his own time and so will you. Keep it up

 

[44k]

Your text layer styles are actually pretty nice. If you don't know what that is, it's the effects you added to the text layer (assuming it's photoshop you're using). However aside from that, there's not much to rave about. I believe the colours are too dark, and perhaps the text is a little small? I mean, in comparison to the brush work you've got happening there, it's totally dominating the text. Perhaps make it a little larger, and brighten it up.

You've got potential if this is progress of a few days man, I wish you luck.

 

TY for the feed back so far. I will work on getting the colors brighter