People should concentrate on the smudging here, not overall composition. I think the smudge style is nice, some more depth would look good but great start
The flow of the smudging is decent but the lighting needs work, the render has light coming from the top right ish but the light in the background doesn't really reflect that
The flow of the smudging is decent but the lighting needs work, the render has light coming from the top right ish but the light in the background doesn't really reflect that