trying something else.

[Issra]

pretty old.
never got around to posting it.

 

[Frugal]

That actually looks pretty cool man. Nice work bro

 

[Lvl 75 Def]

That actually looks pretty cool man. Nice work bro

dat reasoning bro.

the lighting is waywayway too oversharpened on the left side of his face, probably used color dodge there. The flow lacks for me really, mainly because of the monotone use of c4d's. Other then that keep it up

 

[masterborn12]

nice work

 

[Schoolboy Q]

Other then the lighting on the right cheek it looks good

 

dat reasoning bro.

the lighting is waywayway too oversharpened on the left side of his face, probably used color dodge there. The flow lacks for me really, mainly because of the monotone use of c4d's. Other then that keep it up

This. I feel as if the signature doesn't flow well. Also the render could blend better with the c4ds instead of place among them.

 

As others have stated, I think the main problem is blending. The brown strokes don't blend well with the focal.