Mario signature

Haven't made a sig in a while. First in months

CnC greatly appreciated.

v1


v2

 

I think it actually looks pretty good. Although, the Mario render is over used a lot.
I like the smudging, and nice colors. I find V1 a bit better because on V2 the green looks, um.. over sharpened? Text is alright, kinda matches the cartoony Mario.
I like how you blended Mario into the background, and the line going across makes it look even better.
Maybe add some gradient maps, maybe a clipping mask.
It's really good, 8/10.
P.S. I hope this isn't your last sig Jordan. :'(

 

It might be.=[ Thanks for the advice though.

 

I love Mario, but work on the text.

 

Mario isn't the focal point, the text is.

You might want to fix that.

Try blurring and sharpening certain parts.

 

I like it! I like V1 better tho, the colors seem to blend better.
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Off-topic:good luck in the military !

 

First one is better.. Imo. Could use some work on the text.

 

I like it but you should maybe blend more and make whatever hes holding more clear.

 

It's just a beam of light.

Thanks.

 

The first one his feet look messed up and the second one the green is pretty annoying, same with the text. Other than that, good job.

 

i agree with Syed
i like V1 better and also your text is too edgy/choppy do what syed said
and in my opinion your "i" in your text shouldnt be mult colored that kinda isnt working for me... but thats just me

other than that its nice stuff man kick ass

 

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rule_of_thirds

your render is close to a power point but your text is right on top of one and has a drop shadow which draws your eyes towards it so its the focal.

also, the flow is too chaotic.

 

Nice job, considering it's your first in a while.


The text is kind of annoying though

 

Nice job, considering it's your first in a while.


The text is kind of annoying though

 

The "i" is multicolored because it's the center of the angle-aligned gradient overlay.