Rap Battles - Official Thread

no offense but thats a load of shit compared to mine, it doesn;t even make sense....

 

to you ,

when you see the motherfucking wrighting on the wall,
when you see J3T 40 deepies down to brawl,
fuck you hater you see,
that i hate that you breathe,
i see you duck, you little punk, you little fucking disease,
boulevard, brass knuckles in the back of the car,
cuz im a drunk drive cadillac you'll never go far,
when you see me motherfucker better know who we are,
i've got one thing to say to you fucker who hates,
motherfuckers dont know but you better watch what you say,
from you industry fucks, to you faggot ass punks,
im allready loud, maybe its a little to late,
cuz im taking on all you faggots who hate,
cuz im a good motherfucker, there's a price to pay,
im a good motherfucker and its judgement day!
im getting used to you nuisance,
trying to badmouth my music,
how fucking foolish of you to think you can do this,
you never can, you never will, don't even try to persue it,
i took the chance i payed the bill, i nearly died for this music,
you make me wanna run around n pull out my guns out n shit,
tempting me to run my mouth and call you out on this bitch,
how thick you've gotta be to believe you can do this,
you need to slit your wrists, get pissed and go jump off a bridge,
what? can't you see the sarcasm in the verses i spit,
what? you think i just got lucky, didn't work for this shit?
cuz i've been working at this ever since i was a kid,
what kind of person would disemband and then deserve to get big?
i'd hate to be that person when it comes out their kid's lips,
this verse is as good as it gets, it's over you quit,
signed XX mag on your girlfriends tits!
you know your always pressing, you know im never stressing,
i drew up by driveby's and LA gangsta's,
what the fuck you know about being a ganster?
what the fuck you know about being in danger?
you ain't doing this, so you know your just talking shit.


owned.

 

Your flow is shit no offensive


my flow is for battle raps not no " give a dog a bone and little bs ish " if you from my side of town youll understand what i said and those lines would damage you carrer in an actual battle.

it would sould a way lot better in actual battle more than a simple post .

 

Heeeeere, we go.

Now, Pure Boy says that his raps are tight
That can't be right, I kill him when I grab mic
I dig the grave and push this fagot six feet under
There's no police, I sit back and begin to wonder
What's it come ta(to), do I gotta arrest myself?
I'll get some help, I bet ya muma's sex will help
Can't fuck her again, my balls are gettin' the itches
It's the downside, for fuckin' them trailer trash bitches
Laughin' in stitches, watchin' me recite these scriptures
Release a single and I'll start swimmin' in riches
So take ya pictures, and I'll keep workin' my magic
Your mum bought extra large panties and broke the elastic
Shit is tragic, the latest biggest loser contestant
Has been tested, ever since McDonald's invested
Take a deep breath, close your eyes and swallow
Spit your verse, like I ain't hard to follow

 

Oh really, so you fucked my mum?
Well she's a bitch, so i hope you had fun,
thanks a ton, get it right,
don't pop your gun, it's a fight,
not a chance for you to shine,
raps my thing, watch me rhyme,
shootin' at you, ten at a time,
when it's done, click, reload,
next thing ya know, i'm back on road,
get to know me, learn my code,
trust me, it will save your life,
i fucked your daughter and i'll fuck your wife,
do you object? draw for the knife,
tryin'a act like you call the shots,
smoke that pot, you know what?
you saying i'm dead doesn't mean a lot,
i swear, say that one more time,
my words'll become more than rhyme,
think that i'm the one who's whack?
i dare you - look behind your back.


^amateur i know, at least i tried

 

we all gotta start somwhere, but your pretty good

 

nice copying hollywood undead-out the way...

 

nice your copying out the way-hollywood undead.... make you own lyrics your not even recycling your fucken copying word for word.

 

ryannn i see your back so spiy back at me boyyy


Ryan you need to stop trying.
acting like a g , we all know your lying.
sounding like the movie "get rich or die trying"

listen here man, your raps are corny.
when your girl sees me she says "ohh me so horny"
Keep her on my rides like the park named dorny.
We wake up in bed i say good morny.

see man i beat you its already done.
End this battle now I already won.
Now your gana act like a "g" but wheres your gun.
i do this shit for victory not for fun.
Stop crying baby go suck on your thumb.
Your hearing these lyrics and your body's getting numb.
hes got no comebacks so now hes feeling dumb.
Spit back at me boy i see you as some chumm.



you bettta respond haha

 

Should i do later or should i just laugh now.

cause you just Reillerated what i stated in my last round

all that (wa,WA) shit how you be hoodied and mask down

it sounds cute but shut it up im starting to get mad now they said

Alex wasn't a hustler Boi listen... after home room i was 8 ball pitching

had all my halls clicking i was in class making switches im trowing peter points

3's and the teacher point to me and i still could answere the question like

who's charles dickens ( thats a author by the way.) if you pay attention to

this shit this dude say yall realise he says the same shit but just a diffrent

way 1 rhyme he killed a dude because he spark the pound the next rhyme he

killed a dude be cause he hawk him down the next rhyme he killed a dude

because he force him to drown well if you doing all this killing how the fuck

you aint in jail right now. how you get dollaz and cant afford the bail right

now you make me sick some please give me a ginger ail right now. i went on

first page just to see what he got after 2 mins of reading it i just wanted to

delete it i even let me girl read she said "he aint hot" i even

tried to give you props ock belive it or not i was like babie you dont know

who this is its young hotness she said i dont give a fuck who that is son

garbage.


IF YOU EVER BEAT ME not even RIPHLEYS WILL evver BElive in that Shit

 

yall thought i was gone from this thread.
i was but now im back and yall gunna be dead.
dis me in a rap you goin be bleedin red.
what i said is whats goin happen and i stay tru.
if i didnt why you bleedin from that screw i drove in you.
pure boy to, fuck with me ima fuck wit you.
hold onto my word becuz da world know it tru.
i become creative and find a new method of killin you.
fuck you i dont even need a crew
boy we in school im the teacher and your studet numba 2.
i dont like numba 2 so i split him in 2.
that's why you don't fuck with a tru nigga becuz a fake nigga like you
wont know what to do.
so when you in school know who you talkin to.

 

Your more gone than Lil Wayne
If I be seeing red, you be seeing pain
You try to rap like me, try to spit like me
You can't do what I do, Im the one and only
Don't disgrace me, I don't wanna see your face
This is my first commandment, hail the king of this place
Coz I'll tie you up and send you to space and erase
Any link that anyone had with you
Coz what I say is what I do
On the charge of Public Nuisance
My verdict is reached, court is dismissed
Two bullets in your arm, one in your head
Twelve days in hospital, two litres bled
Should teach you not to get ahead
And respect the master that is the arrow
Because the road between me and death is narrow
I am the king and you are my slave
So when you come in the hood you better behave

Yay, rapping with grammar

 

wow finnally someone that knos how to rap hahaha i really like this one gratz =]

 

I don't know who you talkin' to
Saying I'ma get 3 shots and need a screw
I ain't gonna' be the one hurt, it's gonna' be you
Pull my fuckin' .38 before you
Send you straight to my business partner, Nurse Pugh(pronounced pew)
Get 2G commission for the proccess
Got bitches thinkin' it's a contest
Got the audience sayin' "The riddler, not one to mess"
Gotta' run to my preacher and confess
Caused a whole man's family distress
Cause I stuck my fuckin' dick in his mistress


I tried >_<

EDIT: In the 3rd to last line, changed "Gotta' run to my preacher to confess" took out the second "to" and replaced it with "and"

 

i know i never liked your raps and we had are arguements lol but just wanted to say that wasnt to bad everything was pretty good only thing i have to go against is when you rhymed you with you lol when you repeat words it sounds bad but other than that goood job

 

Yea, lol, I couldn't think of anything at that point, that's why I asked my mom (doctor) if anyone's name rhymed with "you" =D

Thanks.

 

Im back haha.... you guys better be prepared.. To: Mysteriuz

Its been a while.. but im ready to go.
get your popcorn ready , because its time for the show.
its time for the final blow.
welcome to death row.
Astalavista baby.. im the terminator, the exterminator.
i just keep coming back like im Ralph Nader.
when do you want your defeat, now or later?
ill hunt you like Steve Irwin hunted gators.
now say your prayer to your sythe saviour(me)
and if your a good boy ill let you out for good behavior.

 

I have one line, you need to learn
ill tell ya, your ears are gnna burn
this shit is hot
your rhymes are starting to rot
one thing is for sure,
my memorie is just a blur
last time i was here i tore this thread up
gnna leave you on the ground face up
ill see you later
fuck off all you haters

 

Your shit is down deep weak
You're my prey, your the one I seek
Mess with me, I'll make your future bleek
Since they all sit down and applaud when I speak
Coz I'm the number one gangster in this place
Mess with me and your gone without a trace
You fucking off all the haters
Fuck you and your muthafuckin traitors
You say your memory is just a blur
Fuck wit me and you'll be down on one knee calling me sir

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Ha, bitch, thinkin' i'ma' be on one knee
Does this kid thinks he's the new Jay-Z?
Get on both your knees you ugly slum
and don't spit and when I cum
My raps leave you so suck like you just drank some rum'

Some say I don't hit hard
Then I hand them my card
"The Riddler, at your service"
"Rap at confident nigga's and leave em' nervous"
Take my #1 business tip and learn it
Never spit at me, just quit it
Cause all you're going to do is spit shit
Then I gotta come back with a line, not even try
Say a few words, then watch you fry.



SHHHHHIT, at the end couldn't think of anything. I tried >_<