Opinions on a new style?

[JxkeDesigns]

Pretty new to sythe, so go easy on me, haha.
This is a my adaptation of a style i learned from Tutvid, hoping to develop it into my own style, any thoughts?

I hope you'll be seeing more posts from me here in the future

 

[r0xie]

decent, throw some effects on the logo itself aswel

 

[JxkeDesigns]

decent, throw some effects on the logo itself aswel

Thanks

What sort of stuff do you have in mind for the logo? i couldn't think of anything which would look too good.

 

[T A I N T E D]

why is it so choppy and the font is bad

 

[r0xie]

Maybe a pattern overlay , resize and a transparent backgroud, then show it here

 

[Arcanity]

Make it a transparent background

 

[stefan5083]

nice.

 

[iGeeks]

Looks neat.
Not sure if it would look good, but what if the letters are 3d?

 

[Amazer]

That is amazing dude if it had a different letter I'd make it my wallpaper

 

The text is too simple while the surrounding effect is too loud. Try to find a balance between the two.

 

[iGeeks]

I actually like that kind of design.
Simple in the background but looks complex at the same time.

 

I love it tbh,
Just wish you didn't cover the text with effects on second one

 

[Away]

I don't like the font in the 2nd one but looks not bad asides from that.

 

[calossus]

The first image looks great, I like the smoke design. Simplistic and creative with logo.

Second is unrefined and a bit rough looking. Too much going on for the smoke.

 

[MtJunks]

i prefer the first one as i find the design flows better and more eye pleasing