New wallpaper I made, opinions please?

This is just another wallpaper I made, personal use for myself.
Any tips, ratings, opinions, and criticism will be much appreciated ^-^

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Don't make it so messy! Keep it nice to look at! , It blinds me man! Haha
No but you have definitely improved at that one , good job!

 

It definitely sticks out really nicely. 10/10.

 

Aha. ^-^~ For some reason, I like messy work, but I agree.
And thanks, you know, the reason im improving is because I have you as an inspiration.

Thanks for the compliment!

 

I think it looks awesome to look at.

OT: That looks great buddy.

Fantastic work.

 

Thanks for the compliment! I've been working more and more on making wallpapers, and I think that I have improved

*Cough* I need some orders to get rsgp for my summoning tank, i need like 35m more, maybe you would like to buy a signature+avatar? [:

 

To be critical of it, the fire isn't blended as well as it should be. It has a completely different quality to the smoke. Also, I think the background is missing something; I think you need an angled basic texture that can 'place' the text, as right now it looks like it's just floating around.

Although I do like it, keep it up