new busness card

[bigk1121]

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[Fendle]

Not bad, looks a little top heavy tho.

Also you would need to be able to spell business card.

 

[MohtasaUnique]

The top is exceptionally unprofessional. It's too cluttered, the ribbons look cheesy, and this:

is not centered nor symmetric, and is the only instance where your kerning is altered, which makes it look like it doesn't belong.

 

[44k]

Your layout sucks. Too much dead space
And as someone else said, the banners are very tacky, you're going to do them, do them well

 

[bigk1121]

How much is it?

how much is what?

 

Personally I think there is too much going on. Business cards are usually minimalistic due to their only being such a small space to work with. I think you should only use one banner max and you need to get shadowing, etc going with it.

For example:

The shadow/texture was brushed on by a friend of mine in several layers

 

[iDrip]

It's a pretty cool design but going back to fendles point, it is abit too heavy