Near Death

[juvenilepunk]

Interpret any way you please.

Time goes on options thinning out
Nothing to live on but remorse and doubt
Down is the only place to go
Life so short it's almost over
A flash of light approaches
It's almost over
It's almost over
But it's not time today
Another time
Another way
Relief flows through the body
An eerie crown is placed on thee
A sense so real so close like belief
Todays not the day
Another time
Another way

 

[whynotecstasy]

i enjoyed it good work

 

[Christmas Crackers]

Not bad, but I think you can add more feeling/emotion to it.

"An eerie crown is placed on thee"
What do you mean by this?