My First ever song pelase rate.

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My First ever song pelase rate.
  1. Unread #21 - Jun 26, 2009 at 2:04 AM
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    My First ever song pelase rate.
    2/10

    not rhymical, lack of syllable structure, bad plot, call disney and you might make millions.
     
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  3. Unread #22 - Jul 11, 2009 at 10:58 AM
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    My First ever song pelase rate.


    haha nice.. but yeah i mean like it would be nice to make lots of money, but i really just want to make music.
     
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    My First ever song pelase rate.
    uhm, its alright for 'A first song' but it actully seemed to me more like a poem, but good luck on ur next one, 3/5.
     
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    My First ever song pelase rate.
    I would work on something else :S unless u REALLY like this kind of lyrical stuff... but, keep it up and dont give up lol.
     
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