well.... its not bad chorus flows really well, instrumentally its good as well my only issues\critiques I have myself would be.
1. singer tries too hard when screaming\growling and it doesn't seem to fit in all places or at least not as well as it could
EDIT: Id like to point out the above is only on rare occasion
2. seems a little too generic in the beginning makes me think im listening to the flavor of the week on the headbangers ball if that show is even still around where they chugg out a real basic riff and call it good.
3. the trip effect is kinda cool but doesn't really seem like it fits in certain area's and could be adjusted in other places.
with that being said you guys are quite good and should have a good music career ahead of you, from what I've noticed all of your band has a good grasp on their instruments and a good understanding of music.
My one tid-bit of advice for newer bands Just think it over before you sign to anyone, make sure its not only a good choice money wise, but that its good for the whole band and that everyone fully understands what they are getting into if you want to be famous you need to throw everything into your music which you probably already know\heard. I've just had several band members hold the rest of us back because they weren't ready due ti rl issues holding them back [family etc.].
I really like it, the singers voice really suits the song. Is this downloadable/on iTunes or something yet? Reminds me a lot of Asking Alexandria - which is a good thing. What do you play in the band?
