Rate my first house track!

[willzy]

Hey everyone, I just finished my first house track, I know its not pro but anyway, I would like to get some feedback. constructive criticism ONLY please

http://soundcloud.com/aintnothingbutrelishbaby/xyz

theres also other tracks but most of them were jokes with my friend.

 

[TahBreezy]

For your first house track this is amazing.

In the beginning of the track the tune changed dramatically in the first 10 seconds which needs to be improved on, other then that, it was good. I liked how the track improved as time went by, and loved you finished it off. Keep up the great work!

I also viewed some of your other tracks.
You seem to be on the right track, I really enjoyed 'Solodemo' which reminded me of a game I used to play in an arcade room.

Good luck in the future with your tracks!

 

[Veni]

About to listen, will edit when I'm done listening


edit; great work man, I think the beginning could use some changes it seemed repetitive, but you did a great job for your first track. Once it got going it was enjoyable

 

[T V]

Sounds good, I really like the part that starts around 0:40,

Great job

 

[angellllllllllll]

damn bro your good !