Life is like a book [Poem]

[Glyder]

I wrote this poem for my English test on writing. I got a perfect 100.

So tell me, what do you think of it?

Life is like a book

You read it, hoping for it to be good

Each day, like a page turn

Not knowing what is to come

You have your good times

And sad times, along with the bad times

The mystery of a book

Like life in a whole new way

But when we realize what we’re here for

The book starts to close

And your life ends

The book closes

The story of your life.​

 

[zzainne66]

Very sweet poem ........Really life is just like your poem ......uncertain but lovely


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I really like your poem, but adding a rhyme scheme would improve it significantly.

 

[Glyder]

The topic for the test was a no-rhyme type. So I came up with this.

Thanks for the good comments. Think I should write more? Alot of my friends say I am pretty good.

Anybody else want to comment?

 

[M I K E]

It's really good actually ..you should write more

 

[Ninja Turtled Like Sparc]

yeah i liked this although it is kinda short :/
Try to extend them to entertain us!!

 

[Deacon Frost]

A lack of a flow, but a neat concept. I bet with a bit more work you could make it a little more enjoyable to read.

You may have intended for it not to rhyme, but you still need a bit more rhythm.

 

[Glyder]

Thanks guys. Yeah Imma write more. I'll be posting more of poems now.

Thanks for the CC. It does help.

 

[Panzy Wanzy]

Interesting poem, I like it but it's very short and there's a slight lack of flow as Deacon Frost said. Hope to see some more pieces from you, I like this.

 

[Glyder]

Bump.

More input please?

 

[nurabutt]

I really liked it, you could make it more in-depth and maybe use words that aren't as simple.
All-in-all it was very nice poem.

 

[The Riddler_]

Everything is alright, but I don't like the ending to much. Even if it ties into the Life (book/poem) ending, It was just too soon. Try to put a few more words of closure.

 

[Glyder]

Thanks.

 

I wrote this poem for my English test on writing. I got a perfect 100.

So tell me, what do you think of it?

Life is like a book

You read it, hoping for it to be good

Each day, like a page turn

Not knowing what is to come

You have your good times

And sad times, along with the bad times

The mystery of a book

Like life in a whole new way

But when we realize what we’re here for

The book starts to close

And your life ends

The book closes

The story of your life.​

I like it....

 

[Glyder]

No offense, but did I give you permission to edit or use it?

 

No offense, but did I give you permission to edit or use it?

Chill brother, it's not for my personal uses. I'll edit it out.