Reported Post by Glyder

[Glyder]

Glyder has reported a post.

Reason:

This person took my writing without permission and changed it. This person should have asked before they did this.

Post: Life is like a book [Poem]
Forum: General Discussion / Off Topic
Assigned Moderators: Nick, Louis, Sindrefyrn

Posted by: Pokemoners2
Original Content:

I wrote this poem for my English test on writing. I got a perfect 100.

So tell me, what do you think of it?

Life is like a book

You read it, hoping for it to be good

Each day, like a page turn

Not knowing what is to come

You have your good times

And sad times, along with the bad times

The mystery of a book

Like life in a whole new way

But when we realize what we’re here for

The book starts to close

And your life ends

The book closes

The story of your life.​

I like it.... Here's what I'd change:

Life is a book

You read it, hoping in your mind things turn out good

Moments past like a page turn

Not knowing what's to come

Not knowing what's to happen, everything's now

Ups and downs, smiles and frowns

You have your times

You have your moments

The mystery of a book

Like life in a whole new way

But when we realize what we’re here for

The book starts to close

And your life ends

The book closes abruptly

Ending, but the story of your life,

Unwritten.

 

[Syed]

He edited it out, chill.