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Just wrote when was bored.. :)

The Chammi

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Just wrote when I was bored. :)

Sittin' there on sofa,
Tryin' get closer,
To the music, homie,
That's What I told ya.

JJ is in the buildin',
So, please, don't leave those bitches,
I don't want to keep that business,
'N don't forget the Haters,
Fuck ya'll *****, I don't want be a saver.

I'm not that fast,
But U can not catch me,
'N even don't think 'bout it,
U won't make it,
'Cause I'm clever,
Like livin' in Toronto would be better,
'N seein' all those bitches,
Movin' from the bottom to the heaven.

It's like keepin' conversation,
With Double-D's shawty,
Who's name beggins like Asia..

I wanna get a hug'ga,
'N don't forget to leave a key under that muddy cover,
I promise, I'll get it,
'N I'll call u anytime, when I'll be in CA.
Yeah, or even in Miami,
Where shawty's booties jumpin' really impressive.​
 
It seemed a little forced...Like you couldn't find something to rhythm so you just found a word and threw it in there no matter the context of it. Decent start though and I'm hoping to see future work from you.
 
It seemed a little forced...Like you couldn't find something to rhythm so you just found a word and threw it in there no matter the context of it. Decent start though and I'm hoping to see future work from you.

Yeah, I agree with u. :)

I'm greener than Green on lyrics writin', lol.
 
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