Great I will pm you when finichedGreat, would love to see it!
Ill let you argue that outAll you do is talk shit about other peoples graphics, and act like you know everything about graphics there is to know, and hey maybe you do, I haven't even seen any of your work. But instead of saying that it's shit, maybe tell them how they could make it better.
OT: definitely have a lot to learn. work on the lighting, are you using c4d?
KIU? and dont worry ill keep practicingplease revert back to where he talks shit? he gave points to improve. Back off internet hero.
OT: i would rate you a beginner even tho i just passed that stage. KIU and get better mate.
TBH I didnt really go for the neon effect it just looks like it with the glow and colours. As for the colours they way the colours that the other people picked as for the dynamic-ness they wanted it to be flat as for mine i couldnt really care less and the lighting I am working on a new stage in c4d thanks for expressing your view but remember im just a beginnerHe asked for a rate and I rated him, go up and read the OP. Then he disagreed with both me and surj when we rated him the same. He is just wanting someone to build him up and I was just being honest and explaining why I rated him that. If he wanted a CnC I can easily provide a CnC.
And you must not have any experience in a real graphics community. It isn't talking shit, it's called critique. You post what is wrong with the piece. If you're coming into the GFX section I am going to be honest with you and not bullshit around trying to make you feel good.
So if you want to continue to talk shit then please PM me and I can explain in-depth.
OT:
What you need to work on is your composition. Just having straight on text with a glow on it and couple of renders isn't good. You have to make it dynamic and you have put depth and flow into. A static signature is boring and it doesn't draw the eye. You add depth through creative blurring and sharpening. Stuff really far back and stuff really close up blurs. Things in the middle ground are sharp and in focus. Next is colors. You color choice is horrendous. The neons don't work if they're matte and look flat. You have to add a sheen and shine to it to give the neon look. Materials are like 50% of a C4D sig and the other important part is lighting. Having an excellent lighting set-up will give a certain crispness to the text. On the caps it will add a white reflection that will make the text look nice and sharp. Next glow should be used very sparingly. It looks unprofessional and really tacky.
High beginner.
You sir, aren't incredibly perceptive - read the original post and stop insulting fellow enthusiasts.
I was hoping for somewhere near high beginner to middle level TBH as that is really all what i am atm ive only just started on gfx and never done it before so thanks





