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Feedback; GFX - Layout Construction
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Very nice! Good work, the main mistake which I can see here is it's too crowded,
The first thing I thought when I opened it was, wow.... that's a lot of things. If I was a potential customer, it might turn me away, perhaps try spacing it out a little more?
The first thing I thought when I opened it was, wow.... that's a lot of things. If I was a potential customer, it might turn me away, perhaps try spacing it out a little more?
Totally agree. Its a plan so its going to be majorly edit; I will definitely take that under consideration. However, if you think about it people like Kinaesthetic have ALOT more text but I think its just crammed issued. Also needa make the boxes more fancy like Kinas
Things are VERY crowded, but the use of boxes to create modules is a very nice idea. Better than the rest of the thread layouts around here.
Try to keep everything cohesive.
By that I mean, use similar colours, reuse layer styles etc, this will make your layout look profession and well thought out.
The layer styles themselves look a little unpolished. Don't over do things, those gradient overlays are very strong, I suggest toning them down.
Also the random logos everywhere are sorta irrelevant, they don't have much purpose.
Good luck
Try to keep everything cohesive.
By that I mean, use similar colours, reuse layer styles etc, this will make your layout look profession and well thought out.
The layer styles themselves look a little unpolished. Don't over do things, those gradient overlays are very strong, I suggest toning them down.
Also the random logos everywhere are sorta irrelevant, they don't have much purpose.
Good luck
Things are VERY crowded, but the use of boxes to create modules is a very nice idea. Better than the rest of the thread layouts around here.
Try to keep everything cohesive.
By that I mean, use similar colours, reuse layer styles etc, this will make your layout look profession and well thought out.
The layer styles themselves look a little unpolished. Don't over do things, those gradient overlays are very strong, I suggest toning them down.
Also the random logos everywhere are sorta irrelevant, they don't have much purpose.
Good luck
Thank you for the feedback! Yeah definitely crowded. I edited that out already just for people to know. I am going use pen tool for a custom shape to fit everything vertically instead as it looks better to me in general. That should be enough feedback until I make new one
Thanks guys.
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