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drawn ASAP Rocky portrait

bigk1121

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this is my first ever portrait.
see more veiws and pics of it here : http://www.behance.net/gallery/ASAP-Rocky-portrait/13215437
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Wow. The detail is really amazing. What materials did you use?
 
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First of all: the hands and the rings look awesome. Especially the rings have a lot of detail and are nicely shaded.

It would have probably been a better idea to start with a better reference picture. His head is tilte to the back, which is rather hard to draw, especially for a first time. Because of this, the head looks out of proportion: the nose looks too small and the mouth looks too big. The irides are out of proportion too - the left one is larger than the right one and don't look round to me.

Try to draw the hair too next time, it looks unfinished like this. I really like the shading between the left eye and the eyebrows, try using that in the rest of the drawing, it will probably give it more dimension.


Edit: I just noticed this wasn't a CnC and I did give quite a bit of criticism. I'm just trying to help you. It already looks good, especially for a first portrait, but maybe you can use this for your future drawings.
 
First of all: the hands and the rings look awesome. Especially the rings have a lot of detail and are nicely shaded.

It would have probably been a better idea to start with a better reference picture. His head is tilte to the back, which is rather hard to draw, especially for a first time. Because of this, the head looks out of proportion: the nose looks too small and the mouth looks too big. The irides are out of proportion too - the left one is larger than the right one and don't look round to me.

Try to draw the hair too next time, it looks unfinished like this. I really like the shading between the left eye and the eyebrows, try using that in the rest of the drawing, it will probably give it more dimension.


Edit: I just noticed this wasn't a CnC and I did give quite a bit of criticism. I'm just trying to help you. It already looks good, especially for a first portrait, but maybe you can use this for your future drawings.

yeah i love cnc. but with the proportions i printed the picture and traced it so thats the proportions of the pic. but thanks for the criticism.
 
Wow. The detail is really amazing. What materials did you use?
i just used a used a pencil set an i had 2 mechanical pencils one with hard led an one with soft led and its on illustration board. and to do this yellow in the updated one i used hard colored pencils, they're not waxy like normal colored pencils. oh yeah i also used a smudge stick and a kneaded eraser.

here is the updated one



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You've got some real talent. Keep it up dude.
 
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Wow youre always amazing buddy
 
thanks again guys



that was my first one lol but i plan on doing one for my mom an dad grandma and grandpa and sister. it is going to be a year long project i'm going to give it to them next year for christmas.

Wish you all the best bud.
 
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Wow that is really good for a first timer. Keep up the great work! I'm sure your family will love them.
 
AMAZING!

to improve: the little bit of hair showing needs some work, it just looks like you coloured it in :P and by the look of your work you got lazy in that bit, because the rest is amazing...
 
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