[c&c] Little People [first vertical]

[Cor-GFX]

v2

Rate/Hate/C&C

Original image:

 

[JesusReins]

I think that looks great actually, and im not usually a fan of most peoples work.

 

[Kiabin]

Too blurred. Nice c4d effect, though.

 

[Granitmaul0]

I love it. You could've tried to edit out the signature first though, because the white line on the right just looks out of place :/

 

[Jev-90]

the depth is bad he is holding an ice cream cone yet it looks like hes so far away from it. Doesnt make sense good concept though

 

[Alteranz]

Depth is a fairly off - having the child so blurred ruins it - lessen it quite a bit... and try to include the c4d into the blurring as well.

 

[wombakage]

Hothothothot
its nice

 

[Cor-GFX]

Added a v2 with less blur.

 

[Dementus]

Don't listen to them haha I love this piece.

Tbh imho it's flawless. The focal point is the ice cream in the front with the child not completely out of the picture, but faded so your eyes stay where the action is.

I think everything you did to it looks great, especially the lighting and c4d.

 

[Alteranz]

Try incorporating the current c4d in the foreground (or something similar) in to the blurred background - it would just mean the boy would further link with the focal.

 

[TheHacker]

v2 is better.

Nice use of c4d too