Bang? o.O

[Diax]

EDIT:
v2

Rate -/10
C&c etc.

 

[Kadaj]

Get rid of the border, and I think theres too much lighting.

 

[frozenrain]

Everything is ok except lighting. It is too much on the top. 6/10

 

[T R 1 B A L]

Lighting's from wrong side of the top, the focal point placement isn't very nice (it would be better if you stuck to rule of thirds), and the text on the right doesn't go as it is, blur it, or take attention off it somehow.

Also, get rid of that border.

 

[Diax]

Lighting's from wrong side of the top, the focal point placement isn't very nice (it would be better if you stuck to rule of thirds), and the text on the right doesn't go as it is, blur it, or take attention off it somehow.

Also, get rid of that border.

Where do you suggest I put my render? =S

 

[T R 1 B A L]

put it right until the bit in between the face and the gun muzzle is on the power spot place.

Also, look at the lighting on the gun, and then where you put the lighting - it's at the wrong place >_<

 

[Mattjew]

It's very good, aside from the lighting near the top. The text is pretty nice, too.

 

[Diax]

put it right until the bit in between the face and the gun muzzle is on the power spot place.

Also, look at the lighting on the gun, and then where you put the lighting - it's at the wrong place >_<

Oh the lightning on the gun LOL'D
Whoops :embar:

Thanks for the advice, will work on it on my next sig.

 

[Kiabin]

The lighting is on strong as said before. I think the background could be set somewhat positioned as the render is. Somewhat nice.