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I know its not very good but i need pointers and tips. I need help how to draw Eyes, Ears, Noses. If any body could help me i'd really appreciate it.

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I dont mind if you critize my work in anyway, As im looking for areas to improve in.
 
It needs more shading and shadowing, you also got the shape of the nose wrong.
 
You need to work on eyes. I know Anime eyes not be the best if you're looking to draw realistically, but they can look better than ovals + pupils.

I think ears are fine, to be honest. The hair could use abit more detail+Depth.

Good luck on your next.
 
Still Finn, I don't see a problem with the nose + ears + the little lines that mark where your mouth is. Like, from your nostrils down to your mouth. Looks alright to me.

And art lessons wouldn't hurt. -Maybe I'm wrong here- but I'm sure all of the best Artists have had a class or so. Maybe not a significant amount of them, but I'm sure it helped.

Best of luck.
 
the beard kinda sucks :)
 
Perhaps we merely have different standard when it comes to art.

I Agree. The Ears, Nose, Eyebrows And The Facial Lines Are All Slightly Deformed, I Have Succesfully Passed My Atm GCSE With An A Grade, So I Know What Im Talking About.
 
Draw the nose like two connecting teardrops, and to make it look realistic, make the bridge of the nose go right to the eye's pupils. Oh, and make the head shape look like an upside down egg, and make the chin less-broad/broader to your preferences.
 
Eyes are WAY too far up on your face, they're in fact exactly in between the top of your head and your chin.

eyes are too small.

The gap in between ur nose and mouth is crazy.

Needs a chin.

Needs shadowing.

Needs eyelashes.

A persons nose is not a triangle.

looks like he got punched in the mouth.

TAKE ART CLASSES.
 
I was looking around for guides on YouTube for you and the best one I found was this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZbyRcn5IJEI
The final outcome is nearly perfect and it shows step by step how he/she got to that point. I'm sure if you use that you will have a better outcome because your current one is pretty poor. Good luck though.
 
1. Dont draw it sideways next time, giving me neck craps tilting my head over
2. Sizes just dont seem right
 
the eyes are on the top of the head, they should be about the same level as you ears, and your shadowing isn't right, it's not even though out the picture, also your missing a body.
 
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Don't take this personally but I don't think drawing is your thing.

You shouldn't waste money on art classes - I think that drawing talent comes naturally.
 
I agree with the above posts. You should probably take art classes, despite my personal belief that having artistic ability is a talent rather than a learned skill.

I agree with you. Art is a talent that grows over time, not something someone can teach you every step of the way.

But I do suggest art classes, you kinda need it....
 
Thank you and i have never taken a art class as i cant really be bothered i just 'try' to practice when im bored. Drawing isnt my strong point.
 
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