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jdmASfk

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use to lurk in the gfx section under phatboy008 back in 08'

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Looks alright, I think would look better without the black on the top & bottom, and if the rear spoiler wasnt in smoke, pretty sure the back wing of a car is called a spoiler I forget =/
 
spoiler was too long on the side and i thought it would of taken focus
 
spoiler was too long on the side and i thought it would of taken focus

Ahhh i Didn't notice that, in that case.
the front is too smokey and needs to be more defined to feel like it's actually popping out of the picture.
 
yeah thought the light on the right side would of looked cool shining through, thanks for the cnc though :)
 
Looks nice, feel like you could expand on the smudging and get rid of the white space. just my opinion ;p

The smuding over the front tire could looks a little LQ too
 
Would look better if you smudge all the way outwards to the edges, and fill up all that negative white space. I do like the concept of having a sort of mist or smoke enveloping the car and the headlights plus general body frame appear through it. I just think you could expand on this more, and perhaps take a different approach to smudging.
 
This looks really nice!
Just some extras, it would look great if you messed around with curves or others for a nice colour correction.
Also, the background would look better black than white!
hope this helps :)
 
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I think if you were able to add more flow between the smoke and car it would look better. Pretty good for a tag once in a while, everytime i go back to photoshop i have always forgotten everything xD
 
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