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I am still learning, and this is my first sig. Please give me critique, and don't hold back. Thanks!

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something about the space above the shoulders doesn't feel right. in general I like it though
 
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Does nothing for me, just a render with outer glow on a background that has been made negative, with some text. You should learn about the rule of thirds for render placement and try to get some more interesting things to put in the background. Probably a canvas that wasn't as wide would be better for this piece.
 
Does nothing for me, just a render with outer glow on a background that has been made negative, with some text. You should learn about the rule of thirds for render placement and try to get some more interesting things to put in the background. Probably a canvas that wasn't as wide would be better for this piece.

Actually I made the background with a black and white gradient and added the brush effect, but thanks for the feedback ^_^

I am new at this so I am not expecting much :p
 
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Name positioning is downsie imo.

Put it in the Middle or Top, or Fill the other areas, having it on one side like that just makes the other side look queer.

overall for a first time, 2/5
 
Not bad but it's pretty simple, remove background of main image ( probs comes removed ), add graddient map and text
 
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I am still learning, and this is my first sig. Please give me critique, and don't hold back. Thanks!

10Sb4

I know you can do better bro. For the outer glow don't just do what I like to call a "check in the box." Try to actually mess around with the settings and make it blend in better. As for the bg it is too blurry for my liking.
 
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My advice:
Render and text placement is off, you should try the rule of thirds.

The general text is off. I don't like the font, it looks like more of a watermark than anything.

Also, the background just looks like a gradient with clouds on top of it.

The color scheme isn't bad, and I don't think it's a bad choice of render though, so keep playing around with it and watch some tutorials and you will definitely improve =]
 
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