My First Layout - honest feedback

This is the first thread layout I've ever made.

What are your thoughts?
Suggestions on improvements?

I appreciate honest feedback: both positive and negative critique!

 

Looks like a layout I'd see on a RuneScape Private Server. Imo too much text and it doesn't overlay very well on the layout itself, but that's just me.

 

Looks like a layout I'd see on a RuneScape Private Server. Imo too much text and it doesn't overlay very well on the layout itself, but that's just me.

I agree, the text explaining the games aren't necessary imo. What do you mean it doesn't overlay?

 

I agree, the text explaining the games aren't necessary imo. What do you mean it doesn't overlay?

Idk feels like it doesn't fit together. Might be just me tho.

 

Text glow make it hard to read tbh...

 

Text glow make it hard to read tbh...

Will keep that in mind for the future

 

too much text but that was prob customer's request, right ?

7,5/10

 

too much text but that was prob customer's request, right ?

7,5/10

Yeah, I would definitely remove some if it was up to me. But in the end, as long as the customer is happy, I'm happy