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Kinaesthic

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I'd like your honest suggestions on this, as I'm not 100% sure I like it.
It is very busy indeed but somehow I like it this way, too.
Again; I'd like your thoughts on it!:)
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looks pretty badass man, i cant even work with photoshop so i think everything looks good!

but this is kickass haha
 
It's a great piece of art, as Photoshop its self is a very intricate program to use to have results like that. However my only issue would be the Style of the words as if I didn't look at your User near your avatar. It look at a fast glance and let's admit half of Sythe users from me browsing this forum for months are Pot heads lol. It reads like Kinea Uic maybe change the color scheme of just the words may help contrast from the background. Otherwise again your a very talented person.
 
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The S and the T seem spaced too far apart unless it is suppose to be that way. Otherwise I like it. It looks like Kinae's thic to me.
 
tbh this c4d text put behind an abstract c4d is getting pretty old. why don't you try to do some actual modeling some stuff in them? I think it'd look pretty cool.
 
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I like it more than the last one, but the font doesn't really work for it - the spacing is kind of all over the place. I also don't think the bluish flares complement the color scheme; perhaps white or gold would work better.

Of course, I'm only judging so harshly because I've seen some of your other work - it's still a nice sig.
 
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I am not really fan of the text. It took me a while to realize what it said and it really seems out of place at some parts
Otherwise I think you did a pretty great job. Personally loves the colors.

Oh one more thing. The "vouches" separate image has a minor flaw around Click to go. It seems to be entirely a different image right there and doesn't flow with the main base.

Still its alot better than what I could do or mostly others around here :P
 
As everything else has said, the text doesn't look right. Mainly the spacing between the 's' and the 't'.

I think this is exacerbated by the 'K', something about it just doesn't look right. It's probably the blending with the c4d render.

Also, I think some deeper colors would be really nice.

It's critical, but it is of course nice.
 
Well, I see maybe 2 or 3 flaws.

First of all, the spacing between the texts is to far.

Second of all, I'm not really of a fan of the text, it took me quite some time to find the word "Kinaesthic", because it's not just a simple text. From just first looking at it, the first thing I saw was "Kinaes", then after that, it loogs like theres a seperate word.

And lastly, I suggest taking out the flare (Your work already looks amazing without it) because it takes away from the original masterpiece IMO, and the color doesnt compliment it's colors scheme. Or, you can just change the saturation/hue of it, to match the red/purple/pink?(:

Sorry for being so critical >.<

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Kin, very nice work. All of your work turns out great and since your good with C4D thats a great skill to have! I wish I would have furthered my self in C4D more but, i'm a photoshop kind of man I cant work with 3D models lol. Sig looks great man, keep up the good work!
 
I like everything other than the font and the font color. It would be nicer if it were to stand out a little more and possibly a more legible font.

In all though I think it looks really nice.
 
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Meh. It's a nice background, but the font is pretty shitty. Also, The "Click Here to go to GFX" Text looks like a last minute photoshop addition
 
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