I've basically used every tut on google, and deviantArt.
Move or get rid of the "GFX Artists, 50 Cent minimum". Also, choose a better font. The red glow doesn't go with it as well unless you change the color of the "CLANK". I'm not the best person to critique this but I don't really like it. Looks like all you did was slap a few brushes together, added a render, then added text.
I'm sure you have. All you did on this was get a PSD/Render, throw it in front of some random brushing, put your name on it which looks horrible, and then the other text at the bottom which is just plain disgusting. Try again.

