Zippy+Reflex=?

[Lvl 75 Def]

Collab guise.
fixed links for some random phaggot named zippyGFX
zippy start:

My finish:

 

[Jiwi]

Blur the blue brush on the right guy's left shoulder and I'd bang it.

 

[Emperor Nero]

Too much C4D spam. I am leaving now, I will explain more when i get back.

 

A little too cluttered but other than that iz saxy!

 

Use splatters with clipping masks, would of made it look better. I'm not fan of the render either. It's too bland and no flow to it. Like I said splatters with clipping masks would make this look better and work on the lighting. c4d is too rough as well, placement isn't bad but it's over sharpened

 

[shane+]

Dont like the focal being centered, but other than that looks good.

 

[Cynthia]

Really nice collab, you should def. do more together.

 

[the_dealer]

There's a screen'ed part, at the top left, looking like a sort of flick, and I find that, for me, it detracts from the focal. I don't know why - could be the sudden change in shade.

 

[Fuzzybear]

The blue on the shoulder goes too far for me.

 

[Detroit]

Awesome! Erase or blur away the blue on the left shoulder and it's even better!