What do you think about this logo?

[VPf2]

It's one of my new creations. I want to make this perfect so what's your opinion about it?

(Click for the enlarged image)

 

[Draucia]

Looks really nice, but it's wayy to large for a logo (in hd view).
I love the smoky effects around the text.

 

The link isn't working for me right now, but telling from the thumbnail there's a few things that could have been improved:

-Text looks blurry
-Should add more depth, smoke doesn't rise in 3 dimensionally off a 2 dimensional objective (this can be done using shadow effects)
-The background could be improved by making the parts behind the focus a very dark blue to emphasize the focus itself

Anyway just a few suggestions.

 

[Draucia]

The link isn't working for me right now, but telling from the thumbnail there's a few things that could have been improved:

-Text looks blurry
-Should add more depth, smoke doesn't rise in 3 dimensionally off a 2 dimensional objective (this can be done using shadow effects)
-The background could be improved by making the parts behind the focus a very dark blue to emphasize the focus itself

Anyway just a few suggestions.

I think if you view the whole image, you will change ur mind. It has a star-ish background, and is very well done.

 

[TDD]

I fail to see a logo. Though what I do see is nice, however, you could certainly improve that radial gradient from the center by changing the mode from 8bits per channel to 16 bits per channel (Image->Mode) and then re-doing the radial gradient, as it looks really choppy at the moment. The stars also have little differentiation, need a few larger and brighter stars to just break it up a little bit.

 

[Yawar]

I like it , though the smoke could go above the text a little.

 

[T R 1 B A L]

It's not a logo, but I like the style and blending.

As TDD said, some parts look slightly LQ, though on the whole it's relatively well executed.