Weasel2013 - Freestyle #1

[Weasel2013]

Me rapping to Shoot em' up - Bone Thugs

Credit (may also want to play when you read the rap)
[youtube]kRrUQeDBSJY&feature=related[/youtube]

Weasel with another hit,
all the other rappers making me have to take a shit,
on them,
cuz this shits all outrageous 2010, (pronounced twenty ten)
no rappers staying true,
my raps on fire but the game is blue,
guess i'll have to shoot em up.

10 years ago all was good,
chilling in the hood with my boys pumping biggy and pac,
luckily i stayed away from the rock,
girls came and they went but i've got no reason to repent,
i never turned my back on my boys,
so I can't believe Diddy turned his back on notorious BIG
Nigga made R kelly go take a pee,
He made this game turn to rubble,
I keep telling him to shave his stubble,
guess i'll have to shoot em up.

I chose thugs cuz I needed to show love,
when they dropped their new album i was scared they'd sold out too,
like Luda on a Justin Beiber track,
but thugs sure can rap.​

Hope you enjoyed it. (It's not any good...and you'd have to know how I wanted it to be rapped for it to match up with the instrumentals.)

 

[Weasel2013]

this is shit.

Thank you.

 

[debideen01]

actually thought it's pretty decent.

 

[ArtsOfHell]

nice its pretty good yo

 

[0 w n t z]

Me rapping to Shoot em' up - Bone Thugs

Credit (may also want to play when you read the rap)
[youtube]kRrUQeDBSJY&feature=related[/youtube]

Weasel with another hit,
all the other rappers making me have to take a shit,
on them,
cuz this shits all outrageous 2010, (pronounced twenty ten)
no rappers staying true,
my raps on fire but the game is blue,
guess i'll have to shoot em up.

10 years ago all was good,
chilling in the hood with my boys pumping biggy and pac,
luckily i stayed away from the rock,
girls came and they went but i've got no reason to repent,
i never turned my back on my boys,
so I can't believe Diddy turned his back on notorious BIG
Nigga made R kelly go take a pee,
He made this game turn to rubble,
I keep telling him to shave his stubble,
guess i'll have to shoot em up.

I chose thugs cuz I needed to show love,
when they dropped their new album i was scared they'd sold out too,
like Luda on a Justin Beiber track,
but thugs sure can rap.​

Sorry to say this, the rap is ok. The lyrics seem like they have no meaning or rythm..It was allright but you need to work on your lyrics is all...



Hope you enjoyed it. (It's not any good...and you'd have to know how I wanted it to be rapped for it to match up with the instrumentals.)

Sorry to say this, the rap is ok. The lyrics seem like they have no meaning or rythm..It was allright but you need to work on your lyrics is all...
Just giving some advice.

 

[Aroxez]

I liked it.

 

[FishFishy]

I know what you mean when you say that you have to know how it's being rapped to match up with everything and sound good. Besides that I think it sounded pretty good.

 

[vegury]

no really... this is shit

Infracted.

 

[overpaidpkr]

gotta hear it

 

[Myztikal]

it was alright

 

[Dammed]

2/10 imo, get rid of the word "boys" in your lyrics, I mean I can't hear you say it but it just sounds gay

20% lyrics 80% how you say em, imo

 

[Weasel2013]

This shit is really old..I'm more of a poet than a rapper. I'm liking J. Cole - Home for the holidays..I might add a webcam-quality version of me free styling..