Viznary Logo

So I'm working on a logo for an up and coming eSports graphic design company, looking for some input on the logo so far:

V2: Most Likely Final

Dank Fire:

 

[Eru]

Solid work so far.
The letter R doesn't really fit with the rest of the letters due to te curves it has.
I don't know about the dot on the I either.

 

Seems like the consistency in the logo is off as several letters don't seem to be anywhere near the same type face. The i is somewhat continued in the A but that style looks out of place with the rest of the type, the R is completely out of place also.

 

Seems like the consistency in the logo is off as several letters don't seem to be anywhere near the same type face. The i is somewhat continued in the A but that style looks out of place with the rest of the type, the R is completely out of place also.

Yeah, believe it or not it's all the same typeface. Definitely still a WIP, will post updates tomorrow.

 

Yeah, believe it or not it's all the same typeface. Definitely still a WIP, will post updates tomorrow.

Are the only customisations you've made the reduced kerning and the i & A then?

 

Are the only customisations you've made the reduced kerning and the i & A then?

Well we adjusted the overall height and some smaller sizing adjustments with some letters. Overall we want to maintain a clean and professional look. OP updated.

 

[ZippyGFX]

Still looks like you need to adjust some kerning between the NAR.

 

 

[Eru]

Looks way better now.

The pink part should be extended base of the I, and the orange part should be whitespace.
After you do that the dot on the I should look alot less out of space

 

[Dr Phantom]

R and Y looked like they walked into the wrong neighbourhood

 

[Camp]

+1 @Dr Phantom