Very first piece

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Very first piece
  1. Unread #1 - May 26, 2017 at 9:09 PM
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    Very first piece

    What do you guys think? CC is super appreciated.

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  3. Unread #2 - May 28, 2017 at 4:26 PM
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    Very first piece

    i dont know if its just the size of the image, but its very pixelated at least on my end. i would try resizing it to 400px x 150px, that is the norm for signature dimensions. i would also try using a different color/gradient for the lettering, make it pop out. other than that, very good for a beginner i think.
     
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    The piece itself looks bigger than it needs to be unless it's that size for a specific reason, e.g., wallpaper. Blending the focal point could be improved. As currently constructed, it looks more so plastered than layered into the photo. Placement/size of text could be better, as right now it's drawing too much attention away from the actual piece.
     
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    The issue is I can't tell what you have done besides putting a render on top of a background and maybe adding a light effect. Is the background something you made or is it a premade background. As stated above, the size is unnecessary. Not bad for a first try though, keep on going!
     
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    Very first piece

    The image is very blurry.. I think you need to sharpen it up a bit to be honest.
     
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    Nice work i think you have done really well on your first one! With time i think you will improve i think if you made it more crisp it would of been improved alot, what have you made it for?
     
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    Very first piece

    that looks good for a starter. good job :)
     
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    Very first piece

    Cute image, Focus on improving face specially eye because of eye looking blurry and eyes are very important for showing expression of person.
     
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    Very first piece

    Hey thought i'd show some support, nice graphic design there man
     
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    Very first piece

    nice work did you make it from scratch or did you just add layers?
     
  21. Unread #11 - Jun 14, 2017 at 1:37 PM
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    Well done man. Keep at it!

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    to be fair mate its onlya few pixels off seeing her snatch , good job brother
     
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    Very first piece

    pretty good but too big, kinda blurry
     
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    thats dope
     
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    Very first piece

    Looks nice as.
    I'm viewing from my phone so it's not pixelated.
    Keep up the good work
     
  31. Unread #16 - Aug 30, 2017 at 10:49 PM
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    Very first piece

    Look really well have you made any more
     
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