Uprising

[Draucia]

Found a stock (thanks to tr1bal for giving me links):

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Uprising -

Not one of my best ones, but I think it looks pretty good.
Its a bit over sharpened around the bottom of the girl, but I tried to add depth.
I think it has a good flow (her arm going upwards, and thats why I named it "Uprising").

C&C

EDIT: Oh and I didn't add text so I guess everyone can use it (just be sure you said I made it) .

 

[Topic]

Woah that's pretty good. I don't think I can see anything I'd change personally, but I'm sure someone else could.

Good job.​

 

[Beliar]

It looks good, but in my view the picture of a girl should be cut a little after her neckline.

 

[Draucia]

Woah that's pretty good. I don't think I can see anything I'd change personally, but I'm sure someone else could.

Good job.​

Thanks

It looks good, but in my view the picture of a girl should be cut a little after her neckline.

Well If I put it like that, you couldn't of fully seen her arm, which was my flow thing (the direction place, can't put it into words).

Thanks for the feedback guys.

 

[Topic]

Thanks



Well If I put it like that, you couldn't of fully seen her arm, which was my flow thing (the direction place, can't put it into words).

Thanks for the feedback guys.

No problem. ​

 

[Syed]

good job draucia another A+ sig.

You're getting really good at this I feel it is a little too over sharpened near the bottom but that's about it.

 

[Draucia]

good job draucia another A+ sig.

You're getting really good at this I feel it is a little too over sharpened near the bottom but that's about it.

Yeah I'm gonna post a V2 with the bottom fixed.

Thanks for the feedback .

 

[Kiabin]

Sorry to burst your bubble, but the sig itself isn't great whatsoever. It's way too over sharpened, the focal is WAY too big and has a horrible placement, the use of effects is too monotone, and the colors just don't make it good. If you work with a black and white stock, leave the sig black and white. It's simple.

 

[Draucia]

Sorry to burst your bubble, but the sig itself isn't great whatsoever. It's way too over sharpened, the focal is WAY too big and has a horrible placement, the use of effects is too monotone, and the colors just don't make it good. If you work with a black and white stock, leave the sig black and white. It's simple.

Yeah I know it sucks, all of mine do . Im still gonna post a V2, and I'm gonna post a V3 with a black and white color to see if that helps.

Thanks for the feedback.

 

[squidge]

Sorry to burst your bubble, but the sig itself isn't great whatsoever. It's way too over sharpened, the focal is WAY too big and has a horrible placement, the use of effects is too monotone, and the colors just don't make it good. If you work with a black and white stock, leave the sig black and white. It's simple.

this.

the arm is very distracting and takes away from the already weird focal.

ya just leave the sig b/w dude.