UK Youth

[pupo2000]

There's no doubt the UK is tough.
There's a lot going on with the government and stuff.
I see kids saying they're happy, but the smile is one of a frown.
There's no doubt this place is on a melt down.

Kids spitting there bars.
But their english is something from mars.
Why can't they just be english?
I'll tell you why, they're selfish.

Crawling streets
That's what the youth do, thinking that they're the elite.
Well let the youth know.
If they carry on like this, they're going to have a blow.

I just wanted to write a quick poem, this is about the the Uk youth, any feedback?
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[Italic]

I love this
Its so epic

 

[yashen]

As true as this is it should reely be called English Youth.
Welsh and Scottish youth couldn't give a shit about rapping , they would rather sit at home on there pc's making dance tracks to play on the bus through their shitty mobile phone speaker...

or be like me play real music in a band, but yeah i like it.

 

[xt2mad]

Nice