Two Verses

[Ryan]

Edited.

 

[Jesse]

Wow, the first one was really good man. Like, really good.

I'm listening to the instrumental and I think I found the perfect beat count for when it started. It kinda goes well with the beat, puts you in the same mood as the original song.

The second one I thought was too short but not a bad rhyme. First > second .

For others:[YOUTUBE]M3AfBwJrxSc[/YOUTUBE]

Start the rapping at like 14 seconds or 18 or so.

 

[Jeff 2 Nasty]

why dont you consider becoming a rapper you have some talent and you can make money

 

[Ryan]

Wow, the first one was really good man. Like, really good.

I'm listening to the instrumental and I think I found the perfect beat count for when it started. It kinda goes well with the beat, puts you in the same mood as the original song.

The second one I thought was too short but not a bad rhyme. First > second .

For others:[youtube]M3AfBwJrxSc[/youtube]

Start the rapping at like 14 seconds or 18 or so.

Thanks for the vid. I'm not sure what time it actually starts, but it starts the same time as the original.

why dont you consider becoming a rapper you have some talent and you can make money

Getting any studio *good* studio time costs a bit of $$$. I'm kinda in debt at the moment, haha.

Thanks for the feedback though

 

[Jesse]

Yeah, Ryan is really good

Come to the U.S. and eat off of talent agents till you get somewhere.

 

[Ryan]

I was going to move the US at the start of this year. Just didn't happen. Might go after I finish school.