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[Topical Battle] Ryan vs Unb4nn3d

Ryan

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Location
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Topic - Lost Love
Lines - 16 (8 Bars)
Due Date - N/A
Votes to win - 5

No dick riding voters
No voting till both people have posted
No hate votes

All votes must contain the following format:

Creativity:
Wordplay:
Originality:
Overall:

Goodluck ^.^
 
Edited.
 
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For you was a rose, that blossomed in the sun,
And in remembrance, my heart has now been swollen.

The pain inside is fierce, just as my love once was,
And as I sit here for an answer, in return you say 'because'.

I don't see what went wrong, as I stood there for you,
In times of need, I was only one of the few.

My feelings were strong, and my emotions now crushed,
Even after it all, what I had done seems flushed.

There may come a day, where you'll need me again,
And if help arrives, I won't be one of the men.

You've ruined my life, and destroyed that around me,
But my love still lingers, and may consume me sadly.

My emotions are flaring, and I can stay with you no longer,
As I know I'll be hurt, just as my previous falter.

I want you in my arms, yet you're so far away,
But as I look around me now, I see a blossomed rose today.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Yes, I was kind of in a rush, but this is the first time I've ever done such a thing.

Good luck to Ryan as well. Cast your Votes!
 
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Creativity:Ryan 8 Unbanned 6
Wordplay: Ryan 7 Unbanned 3
Originality:Ryan 8 Unbanned 6
Overall: Ryan 22 Unbanned 15

Unbanned looked like he didn't know what he was doing. But it's his first time, it sorta sounded like a poem to me.

Anyway nice try Unbanned, But Ryan is still the Rap Battle King.
 
Creativity: Ryan: 9 Unb4nn3d: 7
Wordplay: Ryan: 8 Unb4nn3d: 8
Originality: Ryan: 10 Unb4nn3d: 7
Overall: Ryan: 27 Unb4nn3d: 22

A good try Unb4nn3d, but Ryan's lyrics sounded like they were straight off an Eminem album, and Eminem = Rap God :laugh:

EDIT: Ryan's reminded me a lot of his song "Crazy in Love". And I love that tune so... :)
 
Thanks for the votes guys. I must admit, Unb4nn3d did very well. Don't surprise me like that man ^.^
 
Creativity: Ryan 5, Unb4nn3d 2
Wordplay: Ryan 3, Unb4nn3d 2
Originality: Ryan 1, Unb4nn3d 1
Overall: Ryan 3, Unb4nned 2

"I had the,I never told her, For you was a rose.." Those are all uneeded fillers. Both of your raps were insnaely cliche and totally unoriginal

If you're going to write about love, write in an innovative way.
 
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Creativity: 5, 8
Wordplay: 3, 10
Originality: 1, 5
Overall: 9, 23

Owned Ryan. Hehe, just kidding.
[EDIT] Btw I thought both were complete (edit: awesomeness), but rated them nicely.
 
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Thanks for the votes guys. I must admit, Unb4nn3d did very well. Don't surprise me like that man ^.^

No, I think yours was better. There's a reason for your Title. ;)

Current Status:

  1. Ryan = 3 Vote(s)
  2. Unb4nn3d = 1 Vote(s)

Please keep in mind that the first person to 5 Votes wins!
 
Creativity: Ryan 7
Wordplay: Ryan 6
Originality: Ryan 8
Overall: Ryan 21

Creativity: Unb4nn3d 6
Wordplay: Unb4nn3d 7
Originality: Unb4nn3d 5
Overall: Unb4nn3d 18

Close but I think Ryan has it overall, only barely though.
 
Creativity: Ryan 8
Wordplay: Ryan 7
Originality: Ryan 6
Overall: Ryan 21

Creativity: Unb4nn3d 4
Wordplay: Unb4nn3d 3
Originality: Unb4nn3d 3
Overall: Unb4nn3d 10


Ryan won, although Unb4nn3d's did sound like a poem and flowed better.
 
Creativity: Ryan 8
Wordplay: Ryan 7
Originality: Ryan 6
Overall: Ryan 21

Creativity: Unb4nn3d 4
Wordplay: Unb4nn3d 3
Originality: Unb4nn3d 3
Overall: Unb4nn3d 10


Ryan won, although Unb4nn3d's did sound like a poem and flowed better.

Now, I haven't seen you for awhile, where have you been?
 
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Creativity: Ryan 7, Unb4nn3d 8
Wordplay: Ryan 9, Unb4nn3d 7
Originality: Ryan 6, Unb4nn3d 8
Overall: Ryan 22, Unb4nned 23
 
Well, looks like it's over.

Was 5 - 2(4) if you want to count the votes after it finished.

Unb4nn3d if you want to go again, different topic just let me know ;)
 
Originality would be nice the next time around. There's potential but neither of you followed through for whatever reason.
 
If anyone has an idea for anew topic, let us know.
 
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