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[xDePloY]

EDIT: New one coming out Close/

 

its poos

Firstly my first impression is that it is too wide, I don't really want to have to undergo the chore of looking from one side of my screen to the other to read just one word.

The C4d designs on the side are alright but I'm personally not a fan of them.

I get that the theme is mechanical/industrial but it doesn't quite do it for me (primarily the low quality background irks me)

The text within isn't the best. Fancy text that links is alright for aesthetic purposes but when the information within is also fancy text it makes it cumbersome to read. Also it is best to reframe from using ghetto speak "I ain't some professional"... You should aim to be concise and professional. Also, in reality you are getting paid for it so you are a professional regardless of your experience.

Personally I am not a fan of introductions. A severe case of tl;dr. I think to myself "Ok that's nice -.- *scroll down page*"

Color co-ordination is off also: blue, grey and white seem to be your main colors and then you have stuck some green text and some pink text in which doesn't look good.

Best of luck in your return to the graphics market though

 

[xDePloY]

its poos

Firstly my first impression is that it is too wide, I don't really want to have to undergo the chore of looking from one side of my screen to the other to read just one word.

The C4d designs on the side are alright but I'm personally not a fan of them.

I get that the theme is mechanical/industrial but it doesn't quite do it for me (primarily the low quality background irks me)

The text within isn't the best. Fancy text that links is alright for aesthetic purposes but when the information within is also fancy text it makes it cumbersome to read. Also it is best to reframe from using ghetto speak "I ain't some professional"... You should aim to be concise and professional. Also, in reality you are getting paid for it so you are a professional regardless of your experience.

Personally I am not a fan of introductions. A severe case of tl;dr. I think to myself "Ok that's nice -.- *scroll down page*"

Color co-ordination is off also: blue, grey and white seem to be your main colors and then you have stuck some green text and some pink text in which doesn't look good.

Best of luck in your return to the graphics market though

Totally agree with ya; I was trying to be playful and just whip up something random to see how it looks Will make sure the changes. Anything else ?!

 

Well, I can see that it's not like any of the other popular threads in the market place which I congratulate you for being unique However, I don't really admire the fact that its a 'clipped' piece as in it has noticeable edges. Jack already touched on the other main points, so there is no point in restating those. Good luck on your return mate!

 

[xDePloY]

Well, I can see that it's not like any of the other popular threads in the market place which I congratulate you for being unique However, I don't really admire the fact that its a 'clipped' piece as in it has noticeable edges. Jack already touched on the other main points, so there is no point in restating those. Good luck on your return mate!

Thanks for taking your time on sharing . It was purely experimental and I agree with points given both you and jack. Can be closed till I make a new one .

 

[djweasel]

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