The ugly spider!

[Diax]

Well, this is my first post on this site.

I experimented with this ALOT, I tried alot of different things and shit.
I'm still new with photoshop so yeah. I followed a tut, but changed alot of things.

^Yeah I know, pretty crap eh? =]^ So messy.

SINCE I'M A "leecher" this is proof that i made this.

Need lots of suggestions and tips.
Rate and comment.

 

[Kristian4th]

You could of downloaded the PSD.

But I don't think the arrow brushes go with the splatter brushes, good sig overall though.

 

[Diax]

Kay, thanks. I'll work on that on my next sig.

 

[Vision Ex]

I understand the base concept, and I like it. I would change the flow slightly. You've got a shadow that falls in front of him, and a light source that sits in front of him. That's not physically possible. You've got a splatter that falls down vertically, as if on a plate of glass, when your subject lies on the 'ground.' This confuses the flow again. Yet still, you've got arrows that point at an angle, but again, as if they are on a plate of glass. This does not sync with your subject. I understand the text, as well, but I would imagine that he would write all of the text so that he can read it. That may be nitpicking though, but it could make things more interesting to the artistic eye. This is a good base to start working on in the future.

 

[Diax]

I understand the base concept, and I like it. I would change the flow slightly. You've got a shadow that falls in front of him, and a light source that sits in front of him. That's not physically possible. You've got a splatter that falls down vertically, as if on a plate of glass, when your subject lies on the 'ground.' This confuses the flow again. Yet still, you've got arrows that point at an angle, but again, as if they are on a plate of glass. This does not sync with your subject. I understand the text, as well, but I would imagine that he would write all of the text so that he can read it. That may be nitpicking though, but it could make things more interesting to the artistic eye. This is a good base to start working on in the future.

I understand the base concept, and I like it. I would change the flow slightly.

Yeah I know, I'm not very good when it comes to flow. Need to work on that.

You've got a shadow that falls in front of him, and a light source that sits in front of him.

I didn't notice that, thanks.

Thanks for that long and good suggestions. Will work on that in my next sig.