The Devil Within Sig l Feedback

[FusionxViRaL]

Give some feedback please:

 

[Emperor Nero]

It is quite monochromatic and from what I am guessing it is topazed to death. The effects are random and really needs to be better because right now it just kind of looks likes some textures over the focal and then some background C4Ds. There is nothing that really brings depth into the piece.

 

It is quite monochromatic and from what I am guessing it is topazed to death. The effects are random and really needs to be better because right now it just kind of looks likes some textures over the focal and then some background C4Ds. There is nothing that really brings depth into the piece.

Ehhh I actually kinda like it, it's a bit big though and COULD, I guess, use some more C4D action in the background. If you chopped the height down to like 150-160px it'd look marvelous

EDIT: Especially on the left, it looks sorta blank.

 

[Jeff]

Not bad at all.

Although I'm not an experienced graphical expert, I still love it.

 

[Spraynwipe]

I love the blending of effects with the render, and the different shades between foreground and background. My advice is to add some stronger lighting and depth, as well as more colours, as it does seem fairly monochromatic at the moment and could benefit from some stronger blacks/oranges/yellows.

If it was me, my next step would be to burn around the edges, and dodge the light around the render and some of the background on the right of its head. Then tinker around with colour adjustment layers.

All in all, awesome tag.

 

[FusionxViRaL]

I love the blending of effects with the render, and the different shades between foreground and background. My advice is to add some stronger lighting and depth, as well as more colours, as it does seem fairly monochromatic at the moment and could benefit from some stronger blacks/oranges/yellows.

If it was me, my next step would be to burn around the edges, and dodge the light around the render and some of the background on the right of its head. Then tinker around with colour adjustment layers.

All in all, awesome tag.

thanks for the feedback man i lack off lighting and if you can help me on that, that would be Great