Text Concept I have so far

I'm working on a text concept and I'm having some trouble.
I have the Jack part sorted

Ya my phone camera is bad and there was bad lighting but I don't care

But I'm stuck with the Goff part of my name.
Here is a mock up of my best concept so far.

What I don't like about it I can't think of any way to make both F's full size, as in, they reach are the same height as the rest of the letters.

Help and CnC of what I've done so far would be appreciated


UPDATE 1: Kept putting this off but I pen tooled this up, gonna export it to c4d soon. Decided to drop the Goff as it didn't look decent in the style I had planned.

Update 2: Not sure how I should do the buttons for Vouches etc and I'm not sure what I should do for a background to the text. Credit to Moonglare for aiding me with the c4d part.

Update 3: Sig is finished, thanks to lvl 75 def for making a killer background for it and helping me with the buttons.



Feel free to rate/hate/CnC!

 

Talked to you about this on skype. I see you fixed the 'O'. It looks nice imo. And I don't think you would need to have both 'F's at max height. It looks great. Now digitalize it Can't wait to see the result of this.

 

[Emperor Nero]

That's pretty good. I have to go now, but I will hit you up on MSN later about it.

 

UPDATE: Kept putting this off but I pen tooled this up, gonna export it to c4d soon. Decided to drop the Goff as it didn't look decent in the style I had planned.

 

[paypalwiz]

Looks really good.

 

[T R 1 B A L]

UPDATE: Kept putting this off but I pen tooled this up, gonna export it to c4d soon. Decided to drop the Goff as it didn't look decent in the style I had planned.

On the K, you don't need the little stub of the stem - make the bottom leg of the K start at the lowest point of the stem if that makes sense.

 

[S]

Not sure if its just me, but...The 'K' start point is wider than the C. Not sure if intentional. Also, the 'C' isn't aligned properly, in relevance to height.

 

[PrayerKid]

I love this dude! It looks "Futuristic" and i love the way the letters flow.

10/10 for creativity!

 

On the K, you don't need the little stub of the stem - make the bottom leg of the K start at the lowest point of the stem if that makes sense.

Yeah I know what you mean, I tried that out originally and I preferred having it like this for some reason.

Not sure if its just me, but...The 'K' start point is wider than the C. Not sure if intentional. Also, the 'C' isn't aligned properly, in relevance to height.

The K start point was the same as the C and the C was aligned properly when I pentooled them, I guess when filling the paths they've been altered slightly, I don't know.

 

Great progress bud. Where's Goff?

 

[Jiwi]

So much pink *_*

 

Update 2: Not sure how I should do the buttons for Vouches etc and I'm not sure what I should do for a background to the text. Credit to Moonglare for aiding me with the c4d part.

 

[Heads447]

i dont like....to simple and you forgot to put how to spell youre full scythename....

 

[Noam]

Pretty good so far - For the link text, try going for some San-serif, plain 2D text that covers some of the bottom of the Jack
Don't try to shove alot of words into it, aim for simplicity
http://www.dafont.com/search.php?text=Vouches+MM+Questing&q=motor+oil
http://www.dafont.com/search.php?text=Vouches+MM+Questing&q=bebas+neue are probably good choices. Add some layer styles and you should be set

 

Update 3: Sig is finished, thanks to lvl 75 def for making a killer background for it and helping me with the buttons.



Feel free to rate/hate/CnC!

 

The subtext.. just no. Like I saw the bg and the main text and I was like woah! But then I went down to the subtext and it was a total let down. You want to give people something that they will remember. The fonts dont match too well and the top line is kinda hard to read.

 

[MERCY]

I love it

 

[Noam]

The subtext.. just no. Like I saw the bg and the main text and I was like woah! But then I went down to the subtext and it was a total let down. You want to give people something that they will remember. The fonts dont match too well and the top line is kinda hard to read.

This. The font should be a close fit. Read what I posted about the subtext earlier.
I want to prevent another subtext disaster like in the sig I made you. I gave up trying to convince you that 2D subtext isn't any good at the time but the idea doesn't seem to have sunk in by now.
In addition:
Shitty colors. Worst ones imaginable. Go for White. Please

Anyhow the rest of it is very good and I like it. You have some barely noticeable clipping around the right edge but fixing it is no big deal