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Though this is the second work I have posted with this title, this was the original idea I had for the work, which I prefer over the tiled work that I created a week or so back.
 
it's okay but too much white place on the middle.
 
It looks nice. I haven't seen the one you posted last week, I'll have to check it out.
 
To much white in the middle and on the left side I think you should take some away.
If you want rating 8.5/10
 
To much white, Text is meh and the the BG just doesn't get me going like some of your other work. :/
 
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the left side looks nice, but its overly cloudy on the right and the flow is not preserved
 
change the text its awful and hard to see.
 
Oh, lol, I forgot to mention the meaning behind this one, I think. When designing this work I specifically had this sentence in mind: "And you'd better wear your shades. The spotlights here can burn holes in the stage." I suppose that may explain the white that everyone is saying is too harsh. Works titled after songs are always much better after listening to the song. :P
 
att he first I thought; omfg. tht's horrible, was teh ention to make me blind? but after reading the point of this work I started to feel the signature adn it's pretty genious afterall.
 
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