Superfast Jellyfish

Text is quite small?

 

remove that fucking text
maybe work the colours slightly, i dont like that yellow line being yellow for some reason

this is probably your best if you remove the text

you need to add some depth by blurring the background effects that you think should be in the distance


protip: never listen to people who put a question mark after something that isn't a question they usually dont know what they are talking about

 

text is kinda small to read and the yellow line is messed up because its not 2D...it takes a turn at some point that you dont express...im pretty sure thats the problem with the yellow line but i like the color

 

Its a nice piece of work but maybe a lil too much going on?

 

Toss in some blurring for depth, some scatter smudging around a few corners and a good photo filter and this will be a pretty slick piece