Strike a pose

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Strike a pose
  1. Unread #1 - Mar 24, 2011 at 8:47 PM
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    Strike a pose

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  3. Unread #2 - Mar 25, 2011 at 12:19 AM
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    Mehh :p The C4D doesn't seem to go well with the stock. It could be blurred more, seems too sharp. Maybe incorporate more lighting from the C4D->Stock. I like the gradients, though, w/o the c4d ;P
     
  5. Unread #3 - Mar 25, 2011 at 1:00 PM
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    Strike a pose

    The concept seems pretty cool, though the composition's a little empty and basic, though the main fundamental error you've made in terms of GFX is in the depth.

    If you look at the stock you used, the background seems to be blurred out, and yet the tree in the top right corner seems relatively sharp since either you've sharpened the image as a whole, or forgotten to blur that part, making it seem like that is the area the lens is focusing on, since the area behind that looks blurred. Then, you have on top of that the figure/c4d, making it seem as though the middle-ground and foreground are both in focus, and the background isn't, which simply can't happen, unless the aperture's low. In that case though, all three (bg/mg/fg) would be in focus.

    The problem's only noticeable since the the sharp tree is on a power point (rule of thirds-wise).

    gj anyhows
     
  7. Unread #4 - Mar 25, 2011 at 8:00 PM
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    I like it :)
     
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