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Spidey Smudge Hybrid

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I quite like this one.
 
Really nice, only cc is maybe sharpen spiderman/blur the bg a bit, he doesn't seem to be the focal imo.
 
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Looks super rad Nero. Really nice depth, colours, and atmosphere...

Might benefit it if the smudged c4d's, the orbs, and the background were shifted down 50px or so, and then crop that much off the top of the tag? Wouldn't matter too much if the arm was cut off, and it would look good slightly slimmer.
Try creating a slightly whiter, and brighter, area on the orb as well? A lighter and stronger glow essentially.
 
The depth is near perfect. I feel as if the focal should be a couple of more pixels to the left, and stated it needs to be sharpened more. The effects are amazing as are the smudging. The light source fits the render perfectly. Other than the small errors, I'm going to have to rate this as a 9.5/10. I love it.

EDIT: One thing that you may want to fix is the bright smudging towards the bottom edge. It does distract a bit from the composition of the signature. Otherwise, I love the outcome.
 
I agree.. the depth, lighting, smudging, god everything is amazing (jizz)! Very talented!
 
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