[Speed Art][C&C]Prototype Signature

[NiTR0s]

The title says it all, it's a 'speed art' video I made, while making a signature for another forum.

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Here is the final product:

So let me know what you think!

(*NOTE*: To view the video full screen/HD, you have to go to the actual youtube page of the video)

 

[Emperor Nero]

Well the text isn't good, and there is no depth in the piece. Either the render is LQ or you have oversharpened the claw thing too much; it also needs a lot of work on the color and effects because right now it just kind of looks like some smudging and soft brushing.

 

[NiTR0s]

Well the text isn't good, and there is no depth in the piece. Either the render is LQ or you have oversharpened the claw thing too much; it also needs a lot of work on the color and effects because right now it just kind of looks like some smudging and soft brushing.

Thanks mate, I didn't even notice the amount of focus on the blade! As for the text, I know :/ I've never been any good when it comes to typography, so that's something I have to work on. Thanks for the input!

 

[Spraynwipe]

I agree with Nero, it needs much better depth and lighting. Some more effects would also be nice, but ensure the flow stays consistent.