:+:Speech help:+:

[ownage overdose]

Its a 'vote for me' speech, for the senior SRC.
Help would be massively appreciated.
Heres what I have so far:

"Hey guys,

No one likes listening to long speeches about stuff they don't care about, so i'll keep this brief.

Vote for me [ thumbs up ].

~ I can help you guys out.

~ Im easily approachable.
So if you have an idea or something you want to be expressed ill make sure its heard at the meetings and stuff.

~ Got plenty of leadership and communication skills.
I'm a peer support leader, tennis coach, represented our country and other stuff like that."

Thats about 35 seconds.
I need another 45 seconds and i'm already stuck.

SERIOUS POSTS ONLY
"Tell them you will give them free iceblocks, unisex toilets, more vending machines, longer lunches. etc" will be regarded as spam.
~ Thank you in advance.

 

[Macroman]

More chances to persue career options of their choice,

Say you will try and make school more intersting....

 

[Phatmat]

We just had elections at our school, and you should just try to make them laugh, since that uses up 5 - 10 seconds alone. The people who had serious speeches didn't win, where as those who just went up and spoke, got some laughs, and had a good speech.

- Phatmat.

 

[The_Flames]

Hey Guys Its Me

Instead of me standing up here for minutes on end boring you i'll just tell you a few things, and you can catch up with me later on if you have any questions.

- I can help you out in so many different ways.

- I'm always open for discussion, taking in your idea's and such

- If you have a decent idea i'll make sure your voice is heard

- I'll make sure you can have the best experience in school, within the limits of being reasonable

Remember, if you want to ask me anything then just find me later on and i'll be pleased to answer any of your questions as best i can.

Eh, wasn't sure what exactly the topic was.

 

[ownage overdose]

The Flames.
Same as what I said but different wording.
However ive added my 2nd one into the speech.
Thankyou.