Song Writers!

I'm interested in battling somebody. The lyrics are for a SLOW song, some examples of slow songs can be:

Lips of an Angel - Hinder
Old School - Hedley
Here without you - Three doors down
You and me - Lifehouse

If you haven't heard any of these songs just use our friend, Youtube!

Song can be any length you want. Doesn't have to rhyme, non-participating users will vote after the songs are finished.

Hoping I can spark some interest!

 

[xxx skippster xxx]

im a little confused, you want a slow song or a rap battle? :S

 

A slow song, not a rap battle.

 

[deadzone]

Do you mean by "battling" each make there own song and people choose who they like more? not flaming etc. but just what ever one is more meaningful or who likes what? If this is the case you may want to post some requirements more requirements. I may be willing to battle you if this is how you are figuring this.

 

Yeah, basically write a song of your own style, and members can choose which they like best.

 

[†Tysonâ€Â]

I might be interested but i think it'd take a while to write a good song, so many you should put a limit on how long it can be so theres less delay in songs.

Also you should make it freestyle, i want post-hardcore!

 

Sure, it can be freestlye.

When should entries be due, do you think?

 

[deadzone]

Not sure about a timing but I'd be willing to do this.

EDIT: creating my song now. Make a new thread if you wish to battle me and I'll post in it my song.

 

Why not in this thread? All entries will be posted in this thread, then I'll make one large voting thread.

 

[deadzone]

very well here is a quick one I made a little earlier. Tell me if it's long enough if not I can add to it or make a new one. The reason it's best to make a new thread though is because there will probably be a lot of posts and will be kinda hard to keep track of.

it's warm outside but its cold around here
I got my bag of things about to disappear
I'm still around
stuck around...

A few years ago I about took my life
I met this crazy girl almost made her my wife
I'm still around
stuck around..
I stuck around.

Met this sweet little girl
she's as sweet as can be
she is everything in the world
she is everything to me
she's still around
she's stuck around..
you stuck around.

 

It's long enough. I'll post mine tonight.

 

[Desir0]

i made one ages ago, Ill see if i can find it then ill post it up.

 

[The Robot With Human Hair]

Okay Well I Have 2 Songs I Wrote A While Ago So.

Dark Visions All Around The World,
Spreading Our Message Through The Boys And Girls,
They Say You're After Me And,
You Want Me Dead,
I Must Have Alot Of Cash Upon My Head,
Can't Stop For Sleep,
You Might Just Catch Me,
No Time For Rest,
You Just Might Kill Me,
My Hands Always On My Gun,
Ready To Take Your Life,
Before You Take Mine,
You Came To Take My Life,
Now I'm Taking Yours,
You're A Scum Bounty Hunter,
You'll Never Take Me Alive,
I'll Always Be On The Run,
Till The Very Day I Die,
Have A Moment Of Silence,
For The Victims Of Columbine,
Have An Eternity Of Silence,
For Eric And Dylan,
Outlaws On The Run,
In The Year 2050,
And Still People Are Out To Get Me,
The Voices In My Head,
Driving Constant Paranoia,
Telling Me You're After Me,
And I Have To Kill You,
No Ones Safe,
From My Bullets Of Love,
Taking My Orders From A Power Above,
Drugs In My System,
To Keep Me Awake,
As Long As I'm Awake,
No One Can Take Me Away,
One Bullet In The Chamber,
At All Times,
Never Know When You'll Try To Catch Me,
For My Crimes,
Judgement Day Is Coming,
Only A Matter Of Time,
They Won't Take My Life,
Because I'll Take Mine.

[Spoken]
All You've Ever Known,
All You've Ever Worked For,
Just Got Gunned Down,
Welcome To The Real World Kid,
Welcome To The Real World.

[Distorted Industrial Vocals]
The Life You've Known For So Long,
A Virus You've Just Came Across,
You're Losing All You Love,
You're Losing All You Know,
Loved Ones Dying By The Minuite,
Your Dreams Dying By The Second,
You Must Keep Fighting,
You Can't Give Up,
You've Worked To Hard,
To Let This Go.
[End Distorted Industrial Vocals]

[Chorus 1]
Now The Sun Is Going Down,
As The Deaths Are Going Up,
Vaccinations Nowhere In Sight,
Bodies As Far As You Can See,
Loved Ones Among The Dead,
You're Losing All Hope,
Don't Give In,
Don't Let It Win.
[End Chorus 1]

[A Bit Less Distorted Industrial Vocals]
Panic Spread Across The World,
The World Once Divided,
Unitied In Fear,
Digging Their Own Mass Graves,
Piling The Bodies High,
Higher Than The Cash On Wall Street,
No End In Sight,
Armageddons The Next,
Not To Mention Last,
Date You'll Ever Have,
It's Time For Unity,
To Rise Above The Virus.
[End]

[Chorus 2]
Mass Casualties,
All Across The World,
Uniting All Once Divided,
The Virus Is The Messiah,
Tragedy Brings Us Together,
Peace Tears Us Apart,
If Only We Launch The Nukes,
We'll Never Be Apart.
[End Chorus 2]

[Distorted Industrial Vocals]
Mercy Killings Of The Infected,
Nuclear Warfare Raining Down,
No Matter Who Is Elected,
The Virus Will Bring America Down,
The Stock Market Is Crashing,
And The Titanic Is Sailing,
Full Power Both Engines,
Watching Our Life,
Flash Before Our Eyes,
Arm The Nuclear Warheads,
Begin To Launch The Missle,
Last Minuites On This Earth,
Yet No One Seems To Care,
No One Seems Alarmed,
Last Minuites On This Earth,
We're Being Blasted Into Oblivion,
Last Minuites On This Earth,
Dying From A Self-Induced Holocaust,
The Cause For Which We Fight,
Will Never Be Lost.
[End Distorted Industrial Vocals]

[Chorus 1 (x2)]
[Chorus 2 (4) Fading Out With Sounds Of Warfare Fading In]

 

[Ally]

boooo....

 

[deadzone]

Okay Well I Have 2 Songs I Wrote A While Ago So.

ehh your first song seemed more like a bunch of repetitive ramblings it started out like it might go somewhere but it didn't.. the second one I'm kinda having trouble believing you made considering there not even close to the same type of composing other than they both have to do with murder etc. or w\e. Not saying it isn't you but idk I guess time will tell.

boooo....

spam a little less plz you will be gone before the day is done.

 

[deadzone]

ehh your first song seemed more like a bunch of repetitive ramblings it started out like it might go somewhere but it didn't.. the second one I'm kinda having trouble believing you made considering there not even close to the same type of composing other than they both have to do with murder etc. or w\e. Not saying it isn't you but idk I guess time will tell.



spam a little less plz you will be gone before the day is done.

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P.s. is it ok if I use older songs as well? I have a full album of lyrics that I posted quite a few months ago on sythe but I doubt there will be many that will remember them. If so I got a lot more lol.

 

[†Tysonâ€Â]

I was just thinking, maybe it'd be fairer if no older songs were used? Just because that way everyones had the same amount of time to write a song?

I'm still racking my brain trying to think of lyrics, i've had no inspirations recently .

 

For now, older works will be permitted. Here's my entry:

She's the girl with the cute hair
The one that fell from (way) up there
She's the one in my mind... come nightfall

She's the one the dresses well
She's the one that gives me hell
She's the only one for me
Or if not, thats what it seems to be

She's the moon, I'm the night
She's the sun; shining bright
I'm a cloud; she's the sky
Without her I think I'd die

Where would I be without her
When I can't // hide beside her
How would I live without her
Welcome to my lonely life

I dream of her pretty eyes
I feel her hand touching mine
I miss her breath on my neck
Welcome to my loneeeellly lifee..

Meh, probably isn't that great. But I rushed the last line or so.

C&C would be appreciated. I know it's short, its supposed to have 2 more verses, but I lost inspiration.

Going to post a Youtube video of it soon, (showing how it's sang etc.)

 

[deadzone]

For now, older works will be permitted. Here's my entry:



Meh, probably isn't that great. But I rushed the last line or so.

C&C would be appreciated. I know it's short, its supposed to have 2 more verses, but I lost inspiration.

Going to post a Youtube video of it soon, (showing how it's sang etc.)

It's good, the last verse like you said is lacking. but it's good. This is kinda why I figured we should make a new thread considering people can't vote here and not many people will bother looking.

I may change mine w\ a older one for now or remake my song etc. I didn't put a lot of thought in mine.

 

[madhacker14]

Im interested I write lyrics for my band, all the slow songs anyways!
PM me bruh!