The pen tool is vital, but you have to use it properly.
Do us all a favor and start off working in Illustrator. From experience the wide variety of tools just for this kind of work in illustrator is much greater than in PS, and moving text from Illy to C4D and to PS is truly a piece of cake
Anyhow pretty good job
The N and the E are a bit annoying, and the H could use some work too. It reads naturally though, and that's what's important