I think it looks goodhow long did it take you to make?
i think the text needs to stand out more from the background
Nothing special really, slapping some text onto a background and putting a gradient on it. It's really basic stuff. Should work on building up a piece - foreground, background, midground - the take effects and give them a sense of depth by thinking about the piece in 3D. Which will include light and shadow, depth of field, and all that good stuff. Work on actually making a piece and not just slapping text onto a background.

