Twitter Banner for FaZe Linkzy

I made this cuz I don't like the one he has now.



Thoughts?​

 

I think it actually looks really good! The only thing I might remove would be the bold white line, or make it work better with the N. Just my opinion. Nice work bro.

 

Is it better than the one he has now?

 

I agree with wolf, it's better than his last one but it can use some work on a things like positioning and the text.

 

Got a link to his page to see how it looks on his pages? Image alone looks pretty sick.

 

It seems no one likes how the K and N intersect. I thought how the name is linkzy that it would make sense to play on those words and somehow link them together. Does it really look bad?

 

In theory it should work but it's only the n and k that link and that in itself doesn't even look intentional. I'd increase the kerning so it doesn't intercept the k. Pretty solid banner, better than the previous although I think it could be a bit better. Edges should be darkened imo to draw a focal point in the middle and the faze F should be emphasized a bit, perhaps a glow or slight outline as it doesn't stand out too much at the moment.

 

Do you think it looks a bit better now?

 

Adding lines for the sake of filling space isn't smart design. It is something I used to do a lot as well. My suggestion would be to find something that compliments the image and focal to fill the negative space. You could probably increase the size of the focal image(s) and take the lines out and it was look fine.

 

Alright, and I hope this is what you meant by focal >_<

 

I like the multiple changes you did! You improved a lot your first try. If you want to do something else, you should resize the faze so its a little smaller than his name. Idk how it will look but I think that if you play with the font sizes, you should get great results. If not, just keep it like that man. It could be better to krep it like that, we never know.

Also, you did a logo with colors and a logo black and white (youtube). You should choose colors or no colors, not both. Just a little thing that can improve your design.

 

Fixed

 

That looks good now.

 

Thanks for the help, I usually can make about anything, but sometimes I need people to help point me in the right direction. Thanks.

 

That looks pretty sick, only criticism is that the YouTube emblem is kinda washed out by the bright light behind it in the background

 

Best version by far.

 

Looks good. What effect did you use to make the symbol of faze in clear background, while having the rest of the background a shade darker? Did you have 2 create 2 layers and make the text opacity 0?

 

Agreed. Looks great

 

Looks professional. It's really high quality.

 

second version > first imo. Looks great!