Some shit I've been writing

Lyric 1:

"Topview! A memory!
Fading shades in the distance waving out at me
Impulses are slowing down
Can not connect imagery to reality

As it rains down
power surges out from me
can not comprehend
what happened to me

Fading! The Memory!
All so long ago
And I have difficulty remembering everything
One ritual, so many different choices
Demographically speaking widespread

As it rains down
power surges out from me
can not comprehend
what happened to me"

Work in progress, feel free to guess what the song is about.

Society, and who's to blame

"Eyes pried open at the ceiling
Thinking about all the injustice that's been done to him
He never got the respect he deserved
Didn't feel like anyone understood how he felt

Constantly pestered, demoralized by his peers
Constantly being beaten down, being treated like a tool
Goes to bed at night, one thought on his mind
"Tomorrow I'll shoot up the kids at school"

Columbine - 15 dead
Virginia tech - 33 dead
Winnenden - 16 dead
Kauhajoki - 22 dead

Instead of pointing the blame towards society
fingers point towards a game played by millions

This was a great ending to a once magnificent idea
Puts the gun to his head and pulls the trigger
And force once, he puts his mark on, he puts his mark on, he puts his mark on society."

Again, work in progress, this is about the kid who shot up his school a few months back in germany.

Looks like beer, tastes like piss

"Looks can be deceiving
The truth is never what it seems
Faces equal masks, masks equal treachery
An act of faith, an act for god
One hundred thousand innocent lives taken for freedom
Fighting for peace, fighting for freedom

War
A noble endeavor
Conflict
Crisis
A fucking criminal act

Thousands slaughtered for power
Thousands slaughtered for oil
Thank you very fucking much for this fucking economical crisis."

It's a flying spaghetti monster!

"Believing in imaginary entities
Is this really what it came to
Holding on to those old rituals
You can't figure out why
Hostage to a society who obeys 2000 year old rules

Religion always had the upperhand
Is this really how we want it be?
Keeping on the hatred for everything unlike us
You discriminate, incriminate, all those unlike you
Dumb people getting overruled by the weak

Because religion is a tool for the weak to control the strong
They couldn't take power themselves
Don't have the ability to do things for themselves
Want everyone else to do the work
Progress has been held by back religion."

Note: My native language is not English, but I try as good as I can.

Note2: Criticising never did anyone any good, feedback > all.

 

Like that line but I Fear that it is not your own.

 

It is not indeed.

Doesn't matter anyway. Doesn't make the statement any less true .